Meh..
Although I really like your work, this could have been so much more.
I don't want to present myself as an expert, but I have played LA Noire, and there was much more material to work from than just the facial expression of a witness, and the unlikely detail of the portraits depicted in the notebook.
This game has definitely potential for a great Awesome-video, but you didn't use the full potential. I'd love to see more work, but I hope your next video will be more indepth.
I'm looking forward to the next one!